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princess
New Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 3

0 posted 2001-02-08 02:18 AM

Love Poem

Don’t tell you, but I love you just the same.
Even more – much as I try, it won’t go away.
I love a man who makes me love, and laugh…
Who knows my soul, even better than I –

I count my blessings, for your friendship,
Your guidance, whatever you give I am lucky.
Still it is bittersweet, being so near love,
And so far from its’ return to me.

So I accept and cherish what you offer,
Though you may have no passion for me,
You share your ideas and passions with me.
Someday I’ll know how much harder that is.

But I can’t to lie to myself to make it easy.
I will hear your laugh and be filled with joy.
I will see your smile and your eyes, ice blue.
If you don’t mind, I will quietly love you.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-02-08 02:26 AM

Very neatly done Princess,
Welcome to passions may there be many more well dones before you're through.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

2 posted 2001-02-08 06:20 AM

Very nice poem. And welecome to Paaions

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-02-08 07:27 AM

Princess~
Welcome to Passions.
Thank you for sharing a quiet love story with us.
You will enjoy being part of the circle of friends here.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2001-02-08 07:35 AM

Your words are indeed heartfelt, princess... Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place, full of lots of supportive and loving people... Check your email for a special greeting..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

5 posted 2001-02-08 07:50 AM

Ouch this is a place too many know too well. Well said.

princess
New Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 3

6 posted 2001-02-09 05:50 PM

Thanks to all who took the time to reply. Reading the poem a few days later - it seems a bit whiney. Back to the drawing board!

thanks~

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

7 posted 2001-02-09 06:15 PM

Hi Princess,

Wonderful poetry here thank you so much and welcome to passions I hope you enjoy your stay.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2001-02-09 06:18 PM

Ooooh Like this one

~Maria~

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