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The Deep |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Deep within the deepest deep, Shackled bonds of mindless keep, Silent echoes, soul's refrain, Harbingers of muted pain, Mesistopheles in endless wander, Tortured lives in ceaseless ponder, In dark chasms, tideless sea, Vestibules of melancholy, What lies beyond, I cannot see, Night's conflagrations, worship me, Restless heart and fevered brain, Gloom's desolation, soul's refrain. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh...a dark poem from you. This gave me goosebumps.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--Even in the dark, you poetry is lit by your talent to create a mood with words. Well done! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, Mike, as always. Very well written! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, Powerful deep indeed, I liked this very much, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
A dark world, good work ~Maria~ |
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