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Aquarius - Water Urn
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Aquarius - Water Urn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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 AQUARIUS - WATER URN Avid and blue, looks for things new Quiet yet a star takes on role of ma! Urgent as goat, will gift you their coat Anyone near will want to stay here Recalcitrant ja! But they will go far In everything true, their color ecru Uranus their star, communication their spar Social and fine is this water sign Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAYYYYY COOOL Keth ... an astrology acrostic ... what a groovy idea and Im digging the same line rhyme  creative work me girlie-girl later-water-goddess-gator jm "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
JM, same line rhyme is the only way I can do double acrostics. Thanks for noticing! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, you know this is awesome don't you? No you probably don't this is truly wonderful love it really is. I don't know how you do these double ones, I can only just, and I do mean just, ordinary ones. I said these were too easy for you dear heart, now go and get some sleep. Really absolutely fabulous. Take care love Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Agreed, very cool! Some of my favorite people are Aquarians..  Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Aquarius RULES!!!!!!!! Loved the double acrostic and the same line rhyme as well. Great work on this one and no better sign to do it under.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, I can't comment on the Aquarian thing as I'm not one but I'm glad you enjoyed the characteristics of this one. It's not as good as my Sagittarius or Capricorn but not too shabby. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Kethry, You do these acrostics masterfully. Very nicely done Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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