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twilight. . . twidark
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twilight. . . twidark |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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somewhere between dusk and sunset between sunset and moonrise there is twilight somewhere else between dawn and moonrise between moonset and sunrise there is twidark and in twilight swans in rain and 1wolf at his idea does god seek the twilight but in twidark swims a void of gold in a sea a wet dry twidark but in dark there is light and in light there is dark ------------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
If there was no light, there would be no darkness, and if there was no darkness, there would be no light. Well done Sven. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great poem, Sven, and I think extremely creatively done. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
gotta love them that make up words....for poetic sake! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Superb comparison. Magical imagery... Much love, Elise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, I really think this is one of your best, it truly is. Just what the girls would have whooped over if this had been there to finish off our meal. (It was alright it was a quiet night the restaurant were glad we were there really) This would definitely have got extravagant cheers, and it would have deserved them. Into my library with you so come the next meal they can have you with their irish coffees. You do know I love this one don't you? Because I do.  Take care as always love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
They must coexist always. Just like the sun and the moon. For it is through the darkness of death that the light of eternal life shines. Wow, too deep for me tonight!! LOL. That is all I will say except, nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Elizabeth. . . thank you my friend. . . Sandra. . . thank you, just came out this way. . .  Sunshine. . . what do you mean made-up?? It's right here in my dictionary!!! Elise. . . thank you. . . Marsha. . . keep that up and you're going to give me a big head (I know. . . too late!!). . . but I've always thought that I go better with Lattes than Irish Creme. . . LOL LW. . . no doubt. . . that is WAY too deep for you!! LOL. . . thanks for reading. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well Sir...my 1957 dictionary says 'taint no such thang...but then again... it didn't address any of the ones that Martie and I worked up 'tither... and of course...you have poetic poetical license.... 'cause I naughtily notarized it 'cause I are one... LOL... SHOW ME THE DICTIONARY!....lol... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ I just plain downright LOVE this ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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