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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Don’t the rain bring down forgiveness don’t you hear the laughter of the children as the sun weeps for the stranger while he rests his head upon progress. That moment you wanted back, is gone filling your heart with hope you have won it’s a second of decisions you just can’t bleed that twist your pain and leave in agony. This is my last night of broken sorrow the last time you’ll have my soaring heart I walk amongst the ruins of your salvation finding you alone and smiling painful. The last you will say, cannot forgive you those moments are far gone and you are too just remember the kiss is not the sequence it is what you wanted but could not give. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
My goodness, but this is sad! You sure know how to get your point across. Good write. Hugs, ME |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Definitely sad, but definitely well written. Keep up the good work!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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