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Open Poetry #12

I told you....Nyah!!!

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-01-25 11:08 AM

Your emotion is your knife
A fine, width-defining blade
Of what cuts through in your life
From incisions you have made

Your dreams are but your armor
And the hardness of the shell
Has weakened from atrophy
That has caused your hopes to swell

Your love is your mighty steed
Trusted for its noble air
Call it when you're in need
Hope that it will meet you there

Your lance is a ten-foot pole
That you would not touch me with
And your honor, oh my stalwart friend,
Is nothing but a myth

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-25-2001).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-25 12:07 PM

w.o.w. Heavy, dude...

seems to be a bit of attitude everywhere, and I do like this much...you've got me admiration again, walty!!!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2001-01-25 12:32 PM

Thats telling them...my fav line??And your honor, oh my stalwart friend,
Is nothing but a myth...like this ALOT

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-01-25 03:26 PM

thanx guys i like ya'll cuz i know you mean it

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-25 08:02 PM

Walt~
'Your lance is a ten-foot pole
That you would not touch me with'

That's a wrap !

Intense piece.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-01-26 03:31 PM

This is great, Walt!!! (And note to self after reading that last verse: Call WOW when you need a fantastic put-down! *G*)

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

6 posted 2001-01-26 03:44 PM

Wayout,
Uh-Huh ! Don't think I'll be crossin' lances with you anytime soon ( might get a horn busted off or sumthin' )
Doc

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-01-26 05:25 PM

Nice work Walt Man!

I like this!

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

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