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Rainbow Ribbons |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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A rainbow leaps' over mountain peaks' Blending into the meadow's below Kaleidoscope kites, gold they seek Pastel ribbon's in the breeze flow Kissed softly by the sun, aglow In the shower of lilac rain The raindrop's dancing as kite wind's blow A prism upon a windowpane To some it looks like stringy chow mein Ray's of chopsticks' yellow gold Steaming in mist of summer champagne Color's of mixed vegetables' bold Touch gently the rainbow ribbon skies' Reach out and touch gently with your eye's < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Victoria! Lovely! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Touch gently the rainbow ribbon skies' Reach out and touch gently with your eye's I love the ending to this colorful poem. I enjoyed the imaginative descriptions very much. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, I do so love to watch kites, especially the long streamer kind and fancy ones at the seaside. This conjusrs wonderful images! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
lovely images, V. Last 2 lines particularly felt good  S |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this is beautiful Victoria...fabulous write, love the imagery. well done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"A prism upon a windowpane To some it looks like stringy chow mein Ray's of chopsticks' yellow gold Steaming in mist of summer champagne" STANDING OVATION!!! This poem is filled with such creative expression and a strong voice. Love this figurative language, it's perfect! I love kite-flying too, when I control the kite, I feel so relaxed watching it soar. Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Denise..thank you ..nice hearing from you as always Kcsgrandma..thank you and thank you for peeking in VAS..I like kites too, brings back memories of when i use to fly them with my children.glad you enjoyed sandra..so nice to hear from you HUGS.. Charisma..thank you very much..always nice hearing from you HUGS NOAH. oh my thank you for that ovation ha.. so nice of you to say..pleased you enjoyed.HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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