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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Are you alive? do your eyes know beauty does your heart know love are you open to the wonders that come from above do you look at the world to find all there that's right or do you look for the wrongs and live the death of blind sight? Profanity is not permitted in the forums. Please carefully read the guidelines before posting. [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very good, PoemCrazy. I enjoyed this very much. (aside from the quote at the end that had to be deleted, but that wasn't part of the poem.) Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I missed the quote, but the question itself is enough to provoke profanity...at least from me! I have heard that pain and pleasure provoke the same biochemical responses, and it is only the brain that interprets the difference. Sigh...don't know how true that is? But it sure would explain alot of things.  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yep good questions here...*shakes her head* now if I could come up with answers at the right times and not after..when it doesn't count anymore... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I try very hard to be.  Liked this!"When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
YES!!!!!!!*wink* .....loved it...... |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
greetings and thanks to everyone. sorry about the quote. i thought it was funny. more soon. tom |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
too bad I missed the quote, am very curious. Like the poem though, fast hard, to the point and very thought provoking. I know I am guilty of finding the darkness easier on the eyes than the light, though it's hell on the body and soul. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Tom.. It's hard when one has lived in darkness most of their life, but each day is brighter when you look for the sun, instead of hiding in the closet. Great poem, thank you. Sorry I missed the quote, I need a good laugh! KateBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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