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Open Poetry #12

I Still Have the Blues

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

0 posted 2001-01-24 01:15 PM

I still have the blues
(A Blues song )

By Richard Maxfield
1-24-2001

Fell in love years ago
I just don’t know
Now years have past
Since I seen you last
In heart ach pain
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

The pain I feel
Just wont heal
Hole in my heart
Now were apart
Tell me please
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

I wake at night
In terrible fright
A cold cold sweat
I’m not over you yet
Tear drops fall
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

When will my ear
No longer hear
Will your face
Not haunt this place
Will rest ever come
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

Echoes of mine
Of another time
Once rang so sweet
Now knock me off my feet
On my knees
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

Reflections I see
Of you and me
Back ageist the wall
Tears fall
When will they fade
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

When day breaks
My heart aches
When will I heal
No more pain I feel
Standing alone
I don’t know what to do
I still have the blues for you

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-24 01:49 PM

adding a few harmonica licks here....we've just got to start that band! love dem blues, baby!

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

2 posted 2001-01-25 04:48 AM

Thank you my friend I too love the blues.
Love and light,
Richard

desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

3 posted 2001-01-26 11:30 PM

well let me start off by saying welcome to this place of words and song. we could always use a few more songs here personally. this was a nice song, though at times it dragged a little and the length was a touch long. imagery was wonderful, but the energy was a little weak behind it. at least that's what I see. look it over a bit and see what you can do. It has potential written all over it.

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