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Mellow Dreams.....Tanka
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Mellow Dreams.....Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Mellow Dreams Sunset of glory unite with oceans embrace ardent goodnight kiss while courteous waves convey warm comfort of mellow dreams Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great write charisma! very nice imagery  hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely, lovely Charisma. And the sunset...one of God's best. Is this a shot you captured? It's a superb photo. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wow you go girl! this was hot! an ardent kiss at sunset. truly a dreamy tanka...excellent imagery! smiles atcha,my friend Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love it. Beautiful Tanka Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
DG: thank you my friend VAS: thank you for the lovely, and no it's not my photography...caught these on the net, and my penn translate the words of my feelings, when I met this beautiful photo today... Koko: thank you girly...and yeah you know the feeling right....thanks for the excellent. poeminister: thank you my friend |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would settle for being wrapped up in this one for a great night's peace and warmth anytime. Lovely images you have written here my friend. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: well there is room enough to settle down and share peace and warmth....though. thank you my friend for your lovely comment |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sorry, I posted twice... [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Charisma~ Your haikus, senryus and tankas are such a treat. This is just lovely and I find great inspiration in your words. You have a talent for these Japanese poems! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Love, this is just such a lovely display of your immense talent. I sure do like what you do with the imagery. Makes me wish for the sunset. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful my friend... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Melissa: well thank you my friend for these wonderful compliment, I don't know if I am talented in these fabulous japanese forms , but I do really love all these forms, your comments are always higly appreciated and I'm glad to hear that I can be an inspiration for you, ....wondrous feeling. Marge: sunset is always so warm and beautiful...and I am glad that you enjoyed the imagery Sunshine: thank you for the wonderful my friend. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Charisma, I just adore your tankas and this one is purrrrrrrrfect it's a treasure sweetie... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Charisma, OOOooOooo.. what a great tanka! Beautiful wording! I realllyyy like this one  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent! you are so good at this! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, A tanka full of images and peace. Well done! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Charisma .. this was perfectly wonderful! Lovely imagery ... I could visualize this so beautifully, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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