Open Poetry #12 |
Visions [Repost, OP#1, for Marsha] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Visions Visions come to me in dreaming dreaming whiles the time away away on horses I shall ride far far into the cloudy heights heights which take me to my loving loving man of mine mine so warm, tender, handsome handsome being a state of mind. Mind now you, this way of dreaming, dreaming could be your escape escape to 'what' you may ask; ask away, come what may may your dreams always be visions. ©KRJ 9 September 1999 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Quickly she adds this to her library......woosh! LOVE this! Glad you put it up in #12 for us to enjoy!!! -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine -I like the way you've written this, it goes into my library as well. Beautifully done. Poeminister |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Certainly glad you reposted this...for me, wonderful work! jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is utterly amazing, yet more, Kari please love, how am I supposed to learn if you keep me on a short supply. I love this I don't know if there's any way I can do this, but I'll have a try. (I promise I'll try, okay kid and don't pout dear heart, it doesn't suit you.) I can't say that I'll get this right, and if it isn't love don't blame me. This is such an example of what I was saying, you have such a brilliant talent love. Which is why you are pure sunshine, and I'm ........ not Take care love Majestic Marsha < !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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SEA...can you hear my thanks whoosh by...? {~,^}... Poeminister...watch that library shelf...it can get full rather quickly...[as she smiles...] thank you!...{~,^} Certainly James...who else? {~,^} Thank you!... Marsha...this was a challenge way back when....and yes, you TOO can do it...I have this feeling in my old bones....now, just remember, the key is....ready? HAVE FUN WITH IT!....HUGS....K |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kari, I absolutely love this! Now I've seen yours and Marsha's I'm tempted to give it a try. Could be interesting! write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Do it Kethry...just remember that the very last word should be the very first word... have fun! |
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