Open Poetry #12 |
Indeed |
Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Indeed You enter my life, for what i can see Offer to warm the chill within me There still are some issues that havent been told But I really do want to get out of the cold The feelings I have by others is shared And just like you, no tears have been spared The lonliness is there, but the future looks bright You dont need to continue fighting the fight Tossing and turning, how can you dream Then thoughts of you appear on the scene The window to Space is an infinite place Your friendship and honor i will not disgrace But if two hearts are to be free I offer my hand Indeed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is really wonderful....... -SEA |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Thank you for wonderful welcome to Passions. I'm already starting to like this place. As my name says, I am an Amature but am willing to learn , a friend told me to put my thoughts into writings, so here it goes. Thank You |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I will be looking out for more from you......and your friend gave good advice -SEA |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so beautiful........very touching |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
You enter my life, for what i can see Offer to warm the chill within me There still are some issues that havent been told But I really do want to get out of the cold Very good , I liked this much.. Welcome!! ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Inspiring words, very tenderly written...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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