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Turning Tides
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Turning Tides |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Embalmed in all I’m feeling A death that carried through Yet to find the reasons That keeps me close to you It passes like the river Flows straight to lord knows where The source of all that shivers The root of my despair I’m left with no direction Just flapping in the wind Hid low from all detection On the outside looking in Loss for words to guide this I’ll sit and slumber past The life that I’m now missing My casket has been cast The light I now see dimming My fire hardly burns Heartbeat to a whimper The tide has made its turn And with these words I bid adieu Tomorrow never came Remembering the happy few No one but me to blame [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey lovie...all is well...Hugs to heart. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
ouch ouch!! awwww this is so sad! You wrote it so well, but I wanted to send hugs through to you too! and no adieu for you! please.... more wonderful art from you to come ! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
So sad...but wonderfully written!!! Hope the write helped relieve some of the pain. Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Serene Thank you for the hugs. Koko sometimes the heart can bleed without bleeding Thanks Peppermint writing is a very good release for pain real and imagined Thank you Rich |
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