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My heart stops me
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My heart stops me |
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babeluv73 Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19 |
What is it that you do to me? I can’t breath. All I want to do is cry. I have these feelings too deep inside. They cause me to not get any sleep at night. I can’t concentrate. I can’t say what’s on my mind. Sometimes I just want to lie away and hide. Hide from these feelings you make me feel. Hide from the tears that fall for you. I want to never see you again. I want to end this now. But my heart stops me. And I don’t know why or how. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice one, well written, I can understand exactlty what you are saying, every other one of my poems sound exactly the same . Really enjoyed it, Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tommy . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have a feeling if you end this one your heart will seek out another...James |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Wow, you can see your feelings in this one, Hope everything works out if this is a reality work. love is confusing isn't it. David2 |
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