Open Poetry #12 |
A Phoenix Attitude |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
A Phoenix Attitude In amongst the cold dead ashes of loves’ fire Lies my heart burnt out by yesterdays’ desire And from out of the seeming lifeless heap The Phoenix stirs, awakens from her sleep My heart held within her she starts to glow The fire of life begins to leap, the power flow Incandescence fills the air with flaring flame Majestic and awesome is this phoenix’s name With a flick of her tail she leaves the hearth The air filling with flame she leaves the earth And in spiraling assent she climbs ever higher Filling the air with her wonder, with loves fire Those hearts that witness her maiden flight Are blinded by the sheer brilliance of light My heart within her is resurrected in heat I feel my birth again my heart begins to beat In splendid isolation as she soars on through She lifts her voice in summons calling you Come with me she sings and the air is alight With a thousand phoenixes in formation flight The sky fills with wings of phoenixes on high Their wings so bright the sun heaves a sigh With her sisters to join her in this sky dance She revels in this her first freedoms prance In desperation my heart had broken and died Now it is reborn anew in this thrilling flame ride From out of the ashes of love that didn’t last My heart’s old pains are consigned to the past New hopes call, beckon on this phoenix choir To lift their voices in song louder and higher The future is painted in flames of pure power And truth, love and beauty in me will flower Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Phoenix flys a romance dance In your coolest of nuance. Enjoyed the read. Sy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ the poetry you have been writing lately has been so amazing! I have always loved your poetry, but lately......WOW! -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour, thank you so very very much. This is one of my favourites, and very much my signature tune. Take care Mushy Circe love, thank you so very much, my wings are definitely stretching. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I hope you have included this womans voice in your choir...because I am singing right along with you love...this is absolutely beautiful |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, of course I have, I wouldn't have it any other way. You are in the lead phalanx along with all the other beautiful flying phoenixes. And my wind will always be beneath your wings love, fly high fly free fly strong Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Good read Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is far more than good!!! What a magnificient and beautiful picture and what a feeling of hope!!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Goodby Marsha thank you for everything!!! [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, what a lovely attitude and poem write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper love thank you so very much, as always you are always a welcome name to see. Take care love Mushy Kathleen love, thank you, and stay in touch love, the phoenixes will hold your place for you, I promise. Take care love Mushy Kethry love, always this phoenix will fly with her wings touching yours love Thank you always Take care love Slushy And love, not either perfidious or treacherous, both!! Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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