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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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If I could reach the dullness this slow-moving pain and fed-up sigh beneath rotted soil I'd bury it so that it may perish suffer in coldness slowly very slowly as I have an eye for an eye they say but I can't find it's beginning where did it begin? Lord, grace me with light so that I may discard it Angel of Darkness Jan 11 2001 < !signature--> I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I know the feeling. Well done, Maree. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Amazing imagery Maree ... oh, I know this feeling, and you've described it well, great writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely, Maree....I'm familiar eith it and your description is right on.... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Look to the first tug of love on your heart-- there you will find the beginning.....great work again Maree... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Read it 3 times the first go, and know I'll be back. Loved this. jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--you say in a few perfect words, a feeling that so many have...that is a gift, my friend. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
back for another look Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
keep reaching my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Elizabeth Kit, thanks so much for your lovely reply Thank you so much Balladeer Jamie, Thank you my dear, I will go look for it jwesley, wow 3 times that is lovely, makes me feel good. Thank you Martie, thanks for your lovely compliment oh and it was lovely hearing your sweet voice my friend Jamie peek-a-boo!!! Thank you my friend Sven, reaching I am. Thank you Thank you all so very much for taking the time to read and reply I appreciate it so much Maree I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, in here again...becoming a habit. Still enjoyed it though. j. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yes..i've been there too...  just dont give up..you can sniff it out and conquer it!! especially with that bit of help you ask for in the ending lines...best place to find help is in the big guy hugs maree..g "a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
maree~ this is exquisite as your work always is. i have missed reading your wonderful poems so thanks so much for posting this! hope that you are doing well and hope to talk to you soon. i really liked this one my friend...it becomes you take care. Amy ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
maree sorry about that. it's the real me now LOL... take care amy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I say amen... beautifully done, Maree... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh how I relate...well expressed and may light grace you soon! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jwesley, thank you again  fallen rain, thank you for your sweet reply sweetnsexy, thank you very much, it becomes me ey? hmm thank you hmmm so sweetnsexy is Aimster? or is Aimster sweetnsexy?  hmmm Amy, as long as I got the real you, that's the main thing Vandana, glad you enjoyed, thank you Sista, thanks hon so very much Melissa, thank you for your best wishes Thank you all for taking the time to pop in and have a read and for your lovely replies Maree I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a light at the end of the infinite tunnel woohoo i like yuh |
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