Open Poetry #12 |
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Real Audio Killed the Poetry Star (for Parker... apologies to the Buggles) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) ![]() |
Real Audio Killed the Poetry Star I read you in a book from (18)52 Lying awake intent at reading poems by you If I was numb it didn't stop you coming through. Oh-a oh They took the credit for your second tragedy Rewritten by funk and punk rock newology, and now I understand the problems you can see. Oh-a oh I met your biographer Oh-a oh What did you tell her? Real Audio killed the poetry star Real Audio killed the poetry star. Microphones came and broke your heart. Oh-a-a-a oh And now we write in our fancy apartment studio. We hear the beat and it seems so long ago. And you remember the limericks used to go. Oh-a oh You were the first one. Oh-a oh Now they steal your best ones Real Audio killed the poetry star Real Audio killed the poetry star In my mind your still a star, we can't be beatniks we've come to far. Sound came and broke your heart, put the blame on Bill Gates part You are a poetry star. You are a poetry star. Real Audio killed the poetry star Real Audio killed the poetry star Real Audio killed the poetry star Real Audio killed the poetry star (You are a poetry star) Real Audio killed the poetry star (You are a poetry star) (repeat and fade) |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ You are something else ... and when I figure it out ... I'll let me know ! ![]() *giggling OUT LOUD* here ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice response poem. ![]() [This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
marge grin oman you would love the way i was singing it when i was lissening to my 80's retro cd and was writing this yuh what fun but alas i have no microphone capabilities. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Walt, I was disappointed, I was so hopeing you would sing this.. ![]() ![]() Parker |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
as an avid 80's fan and a child of the 80's, i salute you walt. that was absolutely hilarious. awesome rewrite! i'm just learning how to smile; that's not easy to do. -Art P. Alexakis |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very good. This made me laugh. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
GAWD, BUT I DO LOVE YOU, waltie... and ya gotta know the song to appreciate this....LMAO...you, my friend, are brilliant and funny!!! I laughed for a full minute just reading the title...hugs..heh heh heh |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Walt~ This my friend was awsome, took me back to that fantastic 80's era, my teenage years ((sigh)) ![]() ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I confess ... I think I saw the original music video to this song on "Retro Boogie" just the other night, LOL! Wonderful version Walt ... smiling from ear to ear, but I'm with Parker ... I was sure I was coming in to hear you singing this! Next time ... please???? ![]() Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
LOL Walty you are amazing my dear, I loved this so very much and I loved the song, still do ![]() thanks for a terrific read Maree I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ROFLMAO!! this is great walt! loved it.. jeez..way to turn that smooth as silk voice of parkers into a whole 'nother song... lol the '80's were great werent they...arent they about comin back around yet?? i miss my parachute pants and spiking wrap-around belts...hahaha..and the music...well..nothin like it..!! except..well..except walts version...lol thanks for the humor this morn! hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, now that song is running loose in my mind and will be there all day..........too fun there Walt! ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... PIP goes MTV. *G* Great job, Walt! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nicely done... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Sven falls off his chair in a total fit of laughter. . . * who else could do this but you walt??? ![]() ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
needoh torpedo! who said walt doesn't know his 8d's muzik. pretty pretty pain cave. just being silly |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehe thankies |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I loved this! I actually remember when the song came out. This was so funny! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
HAHAHA!!! This is so cool... Only you could have done this...Now you need to figure out the audio so we can hear you sing it...Way cool this is...ROFLMAO!! Thanks for the laughter, walt!! I needed it!! ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Heya Walt! I thought in the matter of Parker, it was: ten gallon hat killed the poetry star ten gallon hat killed the poetry star oh oh oh oh oh! Cor Really cute idea, you are always full of originality! Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks guys i keep getting booted when i go to the file sites to add the tune so i just gonna leave it alone yuh |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great one, Walt You got us all laughing, now we need a video. You are way, way out there, Walt. That's what I love about you Liz |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*lol*...love these response....and can hear the beat.....mmmm....missing something, don't know what....but....oh yeah now I know I Miss your voice....*lol* ((hugs)) Charisma |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i am bad for bringing this back up but somebody wanted an encore yuh |
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