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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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What is it that you ask? The question does remain What drives you to your task? In this roller coaster game Where one day we are down The next we’re simply not We try so not to drown In this visionary’s knot Is it love that truly scares me? Or lack of thought for it? Do I let these ties unbind me? Or grab a hold of it. Can there be just that one moment When I know just what to do See everywhere I’m going The lies we’re holding to What I need is just the knowledge A glimpse of what’s to be To know that we are living That love can set me free |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Spiked, ya know I'd pop in here and read this poem you wrote... So here I am and I gotta say sweetie this one is grande... I liked this poem a whole bunch and in ways I can relate to some of your penned thoughts... A splendid readPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Cynical? I dont think so sweetie...wonderful Rich |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much Coco and Paula. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
funny...was looking for old poems and since I'm feeling a bit cynical today myself---thought I'd send this around again.  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Serenity caught me off-guard to see my poem again. appreciate the thought Rich |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is pretty good. I enjoyed it... the use of italics had a neat effect. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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