Open Poetry #12 |
Requesting Morpheus [revised, repost] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Requesting Morpheus I want you so, oh Morpheus, to come to me tonight I need peace and quiet, and a silent, non-dream flight into a warm, calming place of beautiful, serene abode, take me please oh Morpheus, till morning do me hold. I beseech thee, sweet Morpheus, to hold my dreams away, for they've left me so uneasy, held me in darkness' sway between the dreaming and reality every single night, oh I beg of you, dear Morpheus, take away all dreams in sight. I desire tonight, oh Morpheus, some blessed hours of peace, hold me soft, hold me warm, I beg on bended knees, for I've said my prayers, oh please, and for now I yearn for blessed release from my dreams, oh please to turn my night of repose into one of quiet, not to toss or turn about, so in the morning I'll wake well, not feel as if to shout for heaven to hear oh how, my nerves have been so frayed oh Morpheus, you'll never know, just how to you I've prayed. So hear me now, hear me true, know I'm facing fact if I don't sleep sound tonight, heaven knows how I'll act; for there are signs that I'll know not what it is to do, except, sweet Morpheus, if not I sleep, I'll come then after you. ©KRJ 3 November 1999 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunshine, these are words to get lost in, and never be in a hurry to find the way out. Lovely work! Robert Joseph |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
When you find Morpheus could you please send him my way? I had to look this one up to understand. Morpheus:The God of dreams. See you just taught me something new...Thanks Very Nice Mr.Magoo |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this, the ending is perfect. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh I love this one.... your cadence danced off the page and this has serenitys name all over it... all me girlies need to sleep very cool write Sun Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Problems sleeping? try counting all the smiles you've given us Beautifully written Sunshine |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert Joseph...enjoy your lost ways....thank you... Mr. Magoo....who knew I would teach you something....thank you... Poeminister, so very glad you enjoyed, thank you... JM....so glad you enjoyed the dance, thank you... Rex...what a kind comment...I will remember that, thank you! |
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