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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-22 10:10 PM




Requesting Morpheus

I want you so, oh Morpheus, to come to me tonight
I need peace and quiet, and a silent, non-dream flight
into a warm, calming place of beautiful, serene abode,
take me please oh Morpheus, till morning do me hold.

I beseech thee, sweet Morpheus, to hold my dreams away,
for they've left me so uneasy, held me in darkness' sway
between the dreaming and reality every single night,
oh I beg of you, dear Morpheus, take away all dreams in sight.

I desire tonight, oh Morpheus, some blessed hours of peace,
hold me soft, hold me warm, I beg on bended knees,
for I've said my prayers, oh please, and for now I yearn
for blessed release from my dreams, oh please to turn

my night of repose into one of quiet, not to toss or turn about,
so in the morning I'll wake well, not feel as if to shout
for heaven to hear oh how, my nerves have been so frayed
oh Morpheus, you'll never know, just how to you I've prayed.

So hear me now, hear me true, know I'm facing fact
if I don't sleep sound tonight, heaven knows how I'll act;
for there are signs that I'll know not what it is to do,
except, sweet Morpheus, if not I sleep, I'll come then after you.

©KRJ
3 November 1999




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-22-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Robert Joseph
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1 posted 2001-01-22 10:15 PM



Sunshine, these are words to get lost in, and never be in a hurry to find the way out.
Lovely work!

Robert Joseph

Mr.Magoo
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2 posted 2001-01-22 11:13 PM


When you find Morpheus could you please send him my way?
I had to look this one up to understand.
Morpheus:The God of dreams.
See you just taught me something new...Thanks
Very Nice
                    Mr.Magoo

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-01-23 12:19 PM


I like this, the ending is perfect.  Nicely penned.

Poeminister

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-01-23 12:39 PM


oh I love this one....
your cadence danced off the page
and this has serenitys name all over it...
all me girlies need to sleep  
very cool write Sun


Poetry is not an opinion expressed ...
It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ...
or a smiling mouth.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 2001-01-24 11:30 PM


Problems sleeping?
try counting all the smiles you've given us

Beautifully written Sunshine

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6 posted 2001-03-03 10:01 PM


Robert Joseph...enjoy your lost ways....thank you...

Mr. Magoo....who knew I would teach you something....thank you...

Poeminister, so very glad you enjoyed, thank you...

JM....so glad you enjoyed the dance, thank you...

Rex...what a kind comment...I will remember that, thank you!

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