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Moving On
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Moving On |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I’m packing the bags of weariness heading out on the road of tomorrow Turning my back on yesterday With all it’s pain and sorrow Maybe I’ll get a job somewhere Epcot in Orlando would be fun I’ve decided I need to move on Follow my heart to the eastern sun Selling off the clutter of my life This heart, you see, it’s fairly new Hardly used these past few years I’m selling it cheap, just for you when at last my journey begins I won’t look back at all that’s passed I’ll ride off into the sunrise Driving east and going fast! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, I'd say that's pretty damn good writing. *L* |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's the palm trees... Balladeer says so... they're like the sirens.... they really are....  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...swaying in the breeze, they are.....promises of a deVine life  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey this is great Sharon, a very positive poem  umm if I come along, we could be Thelma and Louise  but I want Brad Pitt ok!!! so that would make me Thelma? no Louiseoh whatever lol I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Come on over and visit. Just follow the sunrise northeast. This poem captures my mood completely. I'm ready to move on with you Good writing Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Poet deVine, A'hhhh, getting restless, eh? If you can, please spent some time on Vancouver Island, as I can almost guarantee that you may not want to come back. It just happened to me, and I left part of me there. The best to you. BC |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Come on down ! You'll LOVE it ! http://disney.go.com/disneycareers/index.html?clk=11808  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
REALLY? are you really moving? Oh dancing feet! Saw Tampa Bay and points south a couple of years ago...could go back anytime, but I hear they throw northerners out after a fashion...LOL... and oh yeah...neat write! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Don't forget to pack your kind heart. And promise me one thing-- you will teach them how to vote....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Don't much care if you travel heavy Or if you arrive late that you call Don't matter if you travel quickly Or even if you show up at all.... Just....... Don't forget your computer! Love ya, Bob <>< |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!!! Marge, I have that site bookmarked already!! And a goal of mine in 2002 is to travel!! But first, Florida will have one new resident by the end of 2001..and I do know how to vote..and how to count!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
movin' out. . . you know that I love this one deVine. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I love it! You've set your mind to it and now you're going to do it. Enjoy the trip, if you get lost come on down to the Texas Gulf Coast. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
stop by and pick me up, it's cold here and this sounds wonderful! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful way to toss out the yesterdays and look forward to the tomorrows. That is afterall where you will be when you wake up is it not? Loved this one. I know you will like it there when you get there...I lived there for two years. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a great write Ms. deVine...and have fun moving LOL... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Stop in Texas on your way through, PDV. *S* |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Bravo! Why don't you come north, we've got lots of white fluffy stuff to play in (or shovel). Also, people are really cuddling up as the heating bills skyrocket. Enjoyed your post and uplifting attitude. Rae |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great Piece Poet DeVine Move here to Florida myself a couple years ago. Right on the Gulf coast south of Tampa/St pete.... It is paradise here..... we would welcome u here very much so..... Bernie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
PDV, the grass isn't always greener, just remember that. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful, and timely, write. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If you read this message please let me know, I'm conducting a survey. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i know i'm late but better late than never very interesting poem....hmmmmm  Did you move east? So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I hope i learn to write like that oneday! |
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