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Cinderella's Slipper?...Senryu
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Cinderella's Slipper?...Senryu |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Cinderella's Slipper? Here is a slipper? Whose toes won't be cramped in this? Whose foot is this small? Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ShoeMan~ ME ! - ME ! LET IT BE ME !  Delightful, PrincePoeMinister ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh, this is beautiful! Yes, I know all about Cinderella, and how I love the whole magic love that develops in the story (sigh). Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
questions, he asks now instead of seeing my soul he asks questions now Well done Poeminister... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
aghhhh....Marge allready fits the slipper...so now I think that you wouldn't believe me if I told you that I was mine..... love it poeminister.....to cute ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's me, can you see fits my foot delicately can you see, it's me........ * wonderful PM -SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well if i bind my feet real tight, perhaps even i will fit in too.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Poeminister, I believe this is the first writing of yours that I have had the pleasure to read. I read it about five times, and it has much meaning. Well done. BC |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, she who would walk in Cinderella's slippers, might she be as sweet? Enjoyed the trip to the enchanted castle! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, a rose by any other name would smell as sweet... but what about Cinder Ella's feet? I'm sorry, I couldn't resist. ;o} |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
Imagine MY surprise at finding this! If in that slipper I can fit, do you come with it? ~smiling~, sir, ~smiling~ *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It just so happens that I'M missing a shoe...hmmmm.... |
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