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Moonlit Stroll |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
When I see you in the moonlight Your silhouette in a glowing aura The words you say feel so right While you're intimate whispers bring out Pandora Tell me softly all your desires And open my eyes and make me see Ignite my flames, my passion fires Blow your kisses all over me Hold my body in your arms Feel my warmth, feel my soul You draw my goodness and my charms Seeing your silhouette in a moonlit stroll |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
insect, Whew! all that for the silhouette. Excellently well done! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my...you are a romantic soul...love it. Charisma |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful work here.  |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Kethry Thanks I see moonbeams glowing through your hair on a hot summer's night Charisma Thank you A stroll in the moonlight is romantic Meet you on the boardwalk…. Temptress Thank you A stroll with you would bring out the ware-wolf in me |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
insect--Enjoyed this muchly. Nicely penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Poeminister Thank you The moonlight brings out something in all of us |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
insect.............I believe in romance..........very nice...helen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAYYYYYYY COOOOOL on the colors bug-poet  and way romantic on the poem ... great rhyme flow very nice ... your well inspired these days and we reap the benefits  "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Very nice bug...you do have a romantic soul We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Romance at it's best. Silhouettes in the moonlight........what visions this conjures up. Great write!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww,...this is so cool! So glad I caught it. And you.  . *Peace. |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
insect I like this very much. "The words you say feel so right" |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
1slick_lady Thanks The moon draws in the tides of love and romance to your shores Janet Marie By day I see your butterflys By night the moon shines in your eyes Thank you sweet poet Paula Finn The moon shines in your presence With a glow of magical essence Thank you Mark Bohannan Thanks A shot of moonshine for ya? Fire I give you the moon Thank you Amature2 Thanks The moon will light the way |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Whew! ummmm, I think it's almost my bed time Love this!! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
YOU BET.....plenty here in the hills of Kentucky ya know. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Lois Well.. off to bed then.. and have a Super time! Mark Bohannan You get a double! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
what could be more romantic than a moonlight stroll..nicely done insect ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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