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The Fantasy Within
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The Fantasy Within |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
This fantasy reside within I cannot douse the flames My hopes arise, my feelings soar Which only cause me pain As days go by, no words from you My hopes begin to fall Minutes to hours, hours to days You didn't even call I don't know why I love you But I'd shout it from the roof This fantasy that resides within Denies me from truth Then one day, our eyes do meet The cycle starts again I can't hold back the constant flow of the Fantasy that resides within Frankie |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Aw... dat wuz sooo pwetty... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, I think Frankie's going to Hollywood . Sorry about the cheap pun on your name, But I think this is a great poem . You are a very talented poet, I enjoyed reading it a lot . I know what you talking about, it's such a frustrating depressing feeling, hope you don't feel it to much, I can do that for the both of us . Stay lucky . Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well written, my friend...looking forward to more from you...Welcome to Passions! jwesley |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
PoeticEnchantress - Thank you for your tweet reply. Angelswing - Thanks for the compliments....actually the name comes from a favorite movie of mine. Can you guess which one? Hint Michelle Pfieffer. (Hope I spelled that right) JWesley - Appreciate the reply and the welcome. |
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