Open Poetry #12 |
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Touch Me |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Touch Me By: Noah Eaton 1/21/01 Touch me with your words of love Leave me breathless with your beauty Embrace me with your love Share with me with the beauty of romance, outside of our dreams Touch me with your silky gentle hands Shower me with your kisses, as soft as a misty spring rain Speak to me from your softened heart, both feelings happy and sad Share with me everything, I want you love, I want to make you happy and replace the pain Touch me, sweetheart, let me hold you in my arms Breathe with me, darling, through day and night, we’ll always be there for each other I’ll hold you close to me at night, close to my heart As we rest together in sweet dreams, dreaming as true lovers Touch me, my love, you are everything to me The most beautiful part of my life is you When I look into your eyes, I see that warm light that makes me feel free Let me love you, my love, as I will always love you too |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the touch of love that shines in your words....love it. Charisma |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow nice work, I loved reading it, you have a really good theme here . I think it would make a fantastic song/balad . Thanks for writing . L.of.L. Tommy XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ Just so softly sung. Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Noah, this is beautiful...you've a tender loving spirit shining through in this piece. Take care. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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