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Open Poetry #12

Water

Hardkore
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-01-31 01:38 AM

This love is like water
At first it merely trickled through my soul
But now it flows through my heart
Like a tragic flood claiming all that lie in it path
Tragic like this love that has claimed even my soul
only if this love like water could be calmed

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-31 01:44 AM

Love is only tragic when you hurt it.......great writing

-SEA

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-01-31 02:23 AM

another 1 I like....nice........helen

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-02-01 02:25 PM

that kind of water only boils

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-02-03 03:55 PM

FABULOUS! And I must thank helen for pointing me in your direction...Will be looking forward to reading more from you!
Welcome!!!!

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot

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