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Silver Threads....Tanka
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Silver Threads Weaving silver threads Unequalled form of beauty captured innocence fascinated fixation connected with live or dead Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow! I forget what you call this form of poetry, but I loved it very much! Wow, the image fitted perfectly with it! I am impressed! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
very nice! artsygrl |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
very nice! artsygrl |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Brilliantly written my dear friend, MA is definatly right, you have captured the image fantastically, great use of descriptive words . Thanks for writing, as without writing there could be know reading . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice! we had one outside our living room window...HUGE!! my 2 yr old loved to sit with me and watch the spider weave..it was incredible..  hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful imagery and picture. Perfect combination.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it charisma..great pic too...HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it charisma..great pic too...HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this muchly. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
MA: thank you for your wonderful response on these Tanka.....I am glad that you liked it. artsygirl: thank you for your wonderful double post. love it. Angelswing: thank you for this wonderful compliment.....I am happy that you loved it too. dg: aren't they wonderful creatures....love to watch them when the weaves their web....but also make me shivering as I am afraid of those creatures. Lone Wolf: thank you my friend Victoria:glad that you love it...and I love your double post...thank you my friend. Poeminister: thank you my friend. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Have I told you how much I enjoy your creations? They always have such wonderful ways of bringing the beauty of God's vision to us in such clear vividness. Truely wonderful and beautiful my friend. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
this one was very clear and clever imagery! I do also, admire your art, My friend! I love your haiku and tanka form Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: thank you for your words,my friend... and I know that you mean it all.....I am so happy that you enjoyed my simple words....and that's what I love to share...the blessings all around...many free gifts and art...showing God's wondrous love. just as you like to do too in your amazing poetry Koko: thank you for you kind reply....and I am very glad that you like them all....but I know that you are good in these things too.. |
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