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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i whisper under the stars for you i breathe your name into my pillow i sigh upon the winds and hope they echo me into the very pores of you... you are on my mind it is you i long to touch i want to hear your voice before i sleep i want to see your sweet face when i wake i want to reach for you and find you there i need to feel the touch of you upon my skin-- i want to shiver under your fingertips... -dgvarner 1-21-01 "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely thought, my friend. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i whisper under the stars for you i breathe your name into my pillow i sigh upon the winds and hope they echo me into the very pores of you... ================= mmmmmm very very nice DG ... very well expressed poem of longing and what I call my 3 am ache .. very cool poem... the presentation and format added to its pleasures  love the MB20 sig btw shiver on ... jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'you are on my mind it is you i long to touch i want to hear your voice before i sleep' Wonderful poem, dgvarner! I can so relate to this one! I love it! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful expression of that longing that we all feel at times. I truely enjoyed this piece from you and the way you make it all look so simple even when I know it isn't. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee love, hi I managed to get to one of yours before all the others got here to steal my best lines. This is an utterly delicious piece love, truly first class. Michelangelo eat your heart out. Who needs his David, this is far superior love it really is. Didn't I always say you are the tops. Absolutely ace, truly terrific, and I love it Take care dear heart Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
i want to reach for you and find you there i need to feel the touch of you upon my skin-- i want to shiver under your fingertips... *************** *sigh* You know I'm right there with you on this one, Gale. Kind of makes me shiver just thinking about it. *reaching for my blanket* And no, it's NOT because it's 20 below outside. Hope we both get what we want soon. Hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Enjoyed this. Nicely penned. Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JWESLEY..thank you friend JM..yes.."3am ache" is a good thing to call it...lol the dream befriends me when the moon is high.. thanks for reading jm.. SNOWPANTS..thanks for loving it  COWBOY..thank you much my friend..i do have a bit of simplicity about me..lol aw BUBBLES..we dont need no stinking 'david' ..lol thanks for delicious! you keep me blushing with your high praise!! MAR..yep..get that blanket.. lol POEMINISTER..so glad you enjoyed hugs, g |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Did ya' just turn up the heat in here ? Yep ! Thought so ! Lovely thoughts ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
[email protected] it hot in here?? huh?? i didnt notice.... thanks for stoppin in marge hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is a very sweet whisper to the night.. Being as my hands always seem ice cold, I'd have no problem with that shiver part. Parker |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
i want to reach for you and find you there i need to feel the touch of you upon my skin-- i want to shiver under your fingertips... ~g~ WOW..This is great...Have had these yearnings many times "meself".. Hugs ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I want to shiver under your fingertips"...I get the message. James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..i know how to warm cold hands baby... shiver me...LL..thanks for 'WOW'! good to get your replies JAMES.. LOL ...thanks for your reply! "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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emmalouise Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 26 |
My, this is wonderful...It grabbed me from the first line. (You aren't by any chance a Dave Matthews fan, are you? Well done- emma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
EMMA..thank you so much for your reply  and yes, i only have one dave matthews cd--but i like much why do you ask..does this sound like one of their songs??!hugs, g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, if you can warm up these cold hands... tell me how.. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER.. come on over here, i'll whisper it in your ear.....  hugs, g |
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