Open Poetry #12 |
January Rose |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
It almost went unnoticed, All but covered with fresh fallen snow, But somehow through months of cold weather, This magnificent rose did grow. A blossom the color of baby girl pink, Standing strong as the winter winds blew, Her leaves encased in crystal ice, That clung like a summer morn's dew. Unwilling to shed her petals, She proudly struck a pose, Casting an image of beauty, This one, invincible rose. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How inspiring and beautiful! Yes, even in the cold bitterness, life can bloom and grow. A very hopeful message, lovely like your rose Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I have to echo what Melissa said! Beautiful, Bonnie! |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Very beautiful picture you have painted here. A picture of spring and winter all in one. Very Nice. Mr.Magoo |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow........goes to show you that no matter what obstacle is....with enough inner strength even the most fragile and beautiful images of life will win out. Lovely write and very inspiring. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Bonnie..enjoyed very much HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ What a beauty - 'encased in crystal ice' ... Sooooooo lovely a thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Verrreeeeeeeee loveleeeeeeeeeeeee! short yet grand enjoyed the read! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Bonnie, This beauty of a poem gave me such a good feeling, roses are my most favorite flower in the world, to me thay can speak anything you wish them to from the truest of love to the deepest of sympathy, this one I shall enjoy for a long time, thank you so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Bonnie! Very lovely, indeed! Denise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, if a January Rose can survive this month it will bloom again. I love this, thank you for posting this! Kathleen |
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