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Open Poetry #12

S o s

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2001-01-21 01:33 AM

S O S

In a vast ocean full of distress
Out in the horizon a loud S O S

A lonely sailboat
Hopelessly afloat

A broken mast
No line to cast

With all things askew
Then right out of the blue

In the knick of time
A rescue, a line

A guiding light
Shine so bright

A lonely tugboat
To keep you afloat

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-21 01:39 AM

This one holds much beauty and hope in it and I truely loved the fact that your words remind us never to give up. Wonderfully written and expressed.

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

2 posted 2001-01-21 01:43 AM

That was so cute... Hope there's a tug boat to keep me outta trouble when I'm stranded...

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2001-01-21 02:43 AM

Nicely written and encouraging poem! I like this!

sp

I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

4 posted 2001-01-22 09:13 AM

Thank you Mark, PoeticEnchantress, snowpants for your comments . Yes just a reminder that there is always a little Tugboat out there for everyone. Never think your out there alone. And dont be afraid to send that SOS. Thanks Amature2

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