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Never, Always
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Never, Always |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Never, Always I'll never be a copycat I can't even remember what I wrote neither line for line nor note for note I'll never be a copycat but never will I let it go for always it will breathe my soul sometimes it's where I'm at that surprises even me I look around and up is down feet hit the ground sometimes it's where I'm at but never shall I stop this write but always hold to it quite tight then I find me meeting me on my way out the door in my car in the store if I think I see me on the street then I find me meeting me never shall I be dissuaded tho always seems my thoughts are raided I'll never think my words are good perhaps mediocre, knock on wood perhaps an adequate and would if I could but I'll never think my words are good never shall I quit this ink always there's a thought to think I'll always think yours are better each and every little letter each and every way you twine for each and every little rhyme wishing they all were mine I'll always think yours are better never shall I quit my reading always seeds are forever seeding I'll always encourage you along for I'll never be a copycat sometimes it's where I'm at when I find me meeting me I'll never think my words are good I'll always think yours are better I'll always encourage you along never shall I give up on me always shall I look up to thee 01.20.01 |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
'never shall I quit this ink always there's a thought to think' That is SO true! I loved this poem! *applauds* ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Very good! I enjoyed it. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just so cool...into my library it goes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is why so often I look forward to tomorrow so that today I can say the yesterday was as special as the day that tomorrow actually became today. Sounds like you wrote this one for me looking up to you. One day, I will find a path that will allow me to write NEAR your talent and that is what keeps me going. Excellent write. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love it. Beautifully said. Poeminister |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll always think yours are better each and every little letter each and every way you twine for each and every little rhyme wishing they all were mine I'll always think yours are better never shall I quit my reading always seeds are forever seeding I'll always encourage you along for I'll never be a copycat sometimes it's where I'm at when I find me meeting me I'll never think my words are good I'll always think yours are better I'll always encourage you along never shall I give up on me always shall I look up to thee =============== EXACTLY!!!!!!! very cool write Sun ... care to join me? ... in me library  When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Suni, so perfectly penned, a precise paradigm. Excellent! Write on. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Karilea, I love the way you think and write, Your pen will never run dry. Your mind is too rich in creativity, and your words flow so smoothly. I think some of these verses were written for me "I'll never think my words are good perhaps mediocre, knock on wood perhaps an adequate and would if I could but I'll never think my words are good" You have been an inspiration Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--when you meets you on the street, 'twould be so neat, to greet ...and say how sweet you write, my dear, have cheer. I love the way you write...your pen so creative, so sunnily sedated...and one day I would like to meet both of you, to get a clue of how you do....it.  [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"I'll always think yours are better"...yep, yep, yep! Reading my mind you are. No matter what I write, all the others I read are better...'tis a humbling experience. Enjoyed the lightness and the deepness in this ... jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is utterly splendid, truly fantasique, c'est tres tres fomidable M'me Kari, absolutely wonderful. And you can fly better that anyone else I know. This soars dear heart it really and truly does. I love it as you knew I would. and it will find a wonderful spot in the Kari Wing. (Does that make you a wing commander in the Phoenic Rescue Squad? I think it does you know!!) Take care love Majestic Marsha wing second Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, A very nice read, and well done. Never thought of things that you have written, you sure have said a lot here. BC |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I never always post on every poem because there`s just too many and I never always know what to say...but this one I just had to say.. VERY NICELY DONE. Mr. Magoo |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Karilea: Pefectly lovely. and isn't it amazing that I feel the same way. I think your poetry is perfectly excellent, and mine very mediocre. we are our own worst critics, I suppose. Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Is the apple better than the orange? - better poet - who? I for one say Karilea's poetry may be equalled - but never surpassed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of you are the poets I look up to... and all of you keep the wind beneath my wings... Thank You! |
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