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Open Poetry #12

Just Black please...

artsygrl
Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 55
Florida

0 posted 2001-01-20 10:07 PM

Too much information
Too many thoughts
I don't want to immitate... doing what I have to do
Like a lesson in a school book, you learn a little at at time,
And I am taking the selfish moments to lie down for a while,
When the persecution ceases from my own doing, that I don't have time to breath this balance in,
Racing again, the clock that only I hear
pounding in my head,
I don't want to write what seems appropriate
I don't what to change to seem more intelligent
I don't want to polish or push at the moment,
or seem anything,
I just want to say plainly
Like my coffee with out the cream,
Tasting just as bitter but, stronger
-Barbara M. Brewer-
copyright 2001

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-20 10:18 PM

"Like my coffee with out the cream,
Tasting just as bitter but, stronger"

I love the way that sounds......very cool

-SEA

artsygrl
Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 55
Florida

2 posted 2001-01-21 10:51 AM

thanks Sea appreciate the support, I thought mabey it would end better if I added the word
clean at the end?...maybe not?...thanks again I really enjoy this page!*...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-01-21 12:25 PM

artsygirl, I think this may be my favorite of yours! Well executed!

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