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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-01-19 10:39 PM

Darkling Wight

Now that thy deceptive oracles destroy'd
tis time to furnish th' pitch black void
with real light

out of the shrouds
out of your fears
come 'nd let them no longer benight

Morning's Glory awaits thee
open your heart 'nd you'll see
the world, bright

with brave new Love
with a new approach
come thou darkling wight

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-01-19 10:46 PM

Applause Poeminister! I loved the wording in this piece ... such a beautiful flow. What a wonderfully inspirational verse to help lift someone up from the shadows. Very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-01-19 11:26 PM

yes, this is WONDERFUL

Very uplifting and bright

-SEA

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-19 11:28 PM

Poeminister, I have much to learn from the art of your pen...

well done Sir...

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-01-19 11:59 PM

Kit--Thank you so much for stopping by and for your comments.

SEA--

Thank you. Glad enjoyed the read.

Sunshine--Thank you

Poeminister

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

5 posted 2001-01-23 12:30 PM

Excellent my friend
Nicely done!
Must bring this up to the top again

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-01-23 01:47 AM

Insect--Thank you for your comments. Glad you enjoyed.

Poeminister

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peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

7 posted 2001-01-23 02:24 AM

Excellent indeed!!! ... let's keep this near the top!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-01-23 03:24 AM

peppermint--thank you

Poeminister

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