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athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

0 posted 2001-01-19 09:26 PM

Simply

Simply,
You wrote your name
on my heart in red.

You wrote your name
on my dreams in gold.

You wrote your name
on your good-bye to me
in blues and greys.

...Then you broke all my crayons.

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

1 posted 2001-01-19 10:03 PM

Athena, I like it! I really do. I especially love the ending to your poem.

JCGF

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2001-01-19 10:14 PM

A lovely read I liked
~HUG~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

3 posted 2001-01-19 10:16 PM

JC,
What a sweet reply. Thank you so much!
Elise

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

4 posted 2001-01-19 10:20 PM

Tracie,
Thank you so much. You are sweet.
Elise

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-01-20 12:12 PM

This goes into my library.........it's perfect!

-SEA

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2001-01-20 04:53 AM

Next time toss the crayons and pass out permanent markers. I enjoyed this one much and I too like the ending.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-01-20 12:35 PM

Wow, different style for you, I like it a lot.
Sandra

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

8 posted 2001-01-21 05:01 AM

Yes, I liked this one alot!!!
Simple yet strong...

Hugs ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-01-22 10:10 PM

Elise, I really like this one. . .

it is a different style for you. . . I love the last line as well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

10 posted 2001-01-22 11:35 PM

Nicely penned. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

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