Open Poetry #12 |
The Call |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
.......for my angel They come to me Just whispers on the wind Your words unspoken, reaching out From across the miles they descend Each word a tear That falls across my heart Searching, lost and alone I hear the cry your heart imparts Touch me! Hold me! Soothe me! In my dreams I answer the call For in my heart you've pride of place I'll hold you close, never let you go And brush those tears from your face. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh how I hope she lets you help her. Your heart is so big and you are such an understanding person. I love your words. Love and hugs, ann |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Across the miles your words have also reached and touched this heart ... What lovely, lovely thoughts, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Mother Earth ~ I'm sure it helps just knowing that we are there, take care! Marge ~ Sometimes all we can offer are are our thoughts, and sometimes that is just enough. Thankyou! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Eagle One~ this is soothing and so very sweet -SEA |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
"I would never want to hold what does not want to be held" she pleads, saying how they are such good friends, while the feelings resurface, and the uncertainty speaks denying it, Do you ever hold a child that does not want to be held? till they collapse and cling in tears of need? for sometimes the one that seems to push so hard Is the one that wants to be held desperatly -Barbara M. Brewer- artsygrl Eagel One your poems speak to my heart..It nice to read poems by Men that hold such ideas...no offense to men *smile* Just nice to know there are some good ones left.. Hope she sees it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
EagleOne~ This is so tenderly penned, you have a wonderful heart my friend, hope she see's this one ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh me too .... I do hope she reads this EagleOne. So tender, sweet and full of heart, what a lovely piece this is! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
To be held in that one place where all the walls come tumbling down and you don't have to be the "strong" one...to be able to just BE....that's what makes friendship such a nice place to come home to Eagle...you words are beautfiul....but not a beautiful as your heart my friend...It's always a comfort to know that there is an oasis waiting should you ever need it is a comfort beyond my own words...but you know my friend...you know You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such beautiful thoughts from you sir...but with a heart such as yours I expect no less |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes a writer of heart you are. Sharing love with sweetness and purity. I hope she accepts the hand of love and support you reach out to her. *sigh* beautiful. I loved it. Much love and hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eagle..you are a very wise, very kind hearted, very loving man.... thats a good thing..we need more of you around wonderful poem.. hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Friends count the most in times of dispair and you show your heart as a friend wonderfully and tenderly in this piece. Well done in both verse and showing your friendship. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
One lucky angel!!! Kathleen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You manage to take very few words, and weave them into very few lines...but your impact, Sir, is magnificent... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
EagleOne, Beautiful sentiments for your angel. I know she appreciates it. It is amazing how many miles a little love and support can cover. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool Eagle ... and sincere and sweet... a gesture of true friendship written by a poet with a gentle pen and a big heart well done jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is great, Adding to my library of writes Bernie |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww what a big heart you have! I loved this piece tremendously! P.S. WooHoo You remind me of Vince Gill in your picture. That's a good thing...Vince is my favorite. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I am truly touched by all of your replys, each of you deserves an individual response but at the moment I am just lost for words (yes it does happen on occaisions). I thank you one and all, take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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