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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I tried my luck and found you ... I'm looking at you so ... All my heart wishing I was... too. but knowing the ground of the... is all the ground for you. I wish you weren't... or least I could become... as i lie alone and... until i think of you. your face is never... your warmth chills me through. I try to change My heart... when it dreams and thinks of you. The love that spawned you could not be... the love i feel is true I wish i was...so i could be...with you Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wish you weren't... or least I could become... as i lie alone and... until i think of you. your face is never... your warmth chills me through. I try to change My heart... when it dreams and thinks of you. The love that spawned you could not be... the love i feel is true I wish i was...so i could be...with you ================== hey you ...how nice to come here this morn and see your name ... this is so sincere and softly written Walter one for my library file  take care sweet poet jm baby can I hold you tonite ... maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ... you'd be mine. baby can I hold you tonite. ~tracy chapman~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very sad piece...but this is the third time I read it...only to receive a third way of looking at it... thank you for the write... |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad piece, but one I can relate to. You describe it well. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Aww... that was so hauntingly beautiful... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww this is so sad. I read it twice and it's still sad. You did a great job writing this. I sure felt it. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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