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stanzas of couplets [just a thought on who had time]
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stanzas of couplets [just a thought on who had time] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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stanzas of couplets that won’t let you forget the two pencil portrayals and suspicious betrayals coupled to meaningless falls chases & two sided faces resentful dreams nasty calls and machines for phone walls of calendar races can’t find the address or spaces to park your car and your late ‘cause you had to walk to far beyond coercions & rainy day corrosive desertions & did you get on line and check your mail in time or did you just forget it all were you able to stay in bed get out of your head did you recover at all do you feel you been left behind well then if you didn’t you haven’t got the time . Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ 'were you able to stay in bed get out of your head did you recover at all do you feel you been left behind well then if you didn’t you haven’t got the time .' I did - I did - a little - not really and I'll make the time !  Hugs n' stuff~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, Why don't you stop by. It's around 6am. and wouldn't ya ya know we got snow..! Nice time for showing a house huh..? love dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
oh wow - did I 'feel' this - you bet! - btw - you can 'take' anything you want from anything I write ANYTIME Dale |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--you are in my thoughts, and you know...time does just keep on moving and the snow is on the mountains...and soon February will be over. |
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StumperDaBumper Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 19State of Mind, Compassion USA |
Bumpintine Bumpintine Won't a bump be mighty fine Another trip around the forum cause I think it's awful boring without a little bump or two Here's one from me just for you! Happy Bumpintine! Are we having fun yet? |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This poem makes me think that crawling into our warm waterbed and hiding under the down comforter burying my head in a pillow might be the sweetest thing! I'm so tired of showing the house and etc., etc., etc. Yes, just plain tired. I liked these words!!! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I want to thank you all once again... I know you won't see this unless you return here again... But I send each and every one of you my love and caring... And don't forget to keep on writing... dale |
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