Open Poetry #12 |
Weeping autumn sky |
Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
"Weeping Autumn Sky" October flowers fall to earth Ancient trees are bleeding, Time is frail, as youth grows old Fading into November morning. Cold winds blow winter's herald First snow falls as angels cry, A dove circles in the cold night With it's heart lonely like mine. As the autumn sky is weeping My soul joins it in crying, Where the dove flies in my heart You'll see the angel dying… (within) Black roses fall to lay on earth Like a babe to mother's breast, Like this man who has lost his hope Who has seen love sent to rest. October leaves fall in the night Amidst the angels' tears of snow I, like the dove, cry out for death To release me from this sorrow. As the Autumn sky is weeping My soul joins it in crying, Where the dove flies in my heart You'll see the angel dying. And the angels weep, and not for me But for the earth's loss of light and bliss. And they will grant me the end of pain Sending Death with her gentle kiss |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice I liked this, has great discription I will look forward to reading more of your work Julie |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Thank you whiskey for reading my work gk |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful piece...and way back in the blue pages...well worth to bump you up. Charisma |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
This haunts in its voice detached. You have captured the feelings quite well, your yearning for passage is echoed by many at one or all times in their breathing. Well done. AT |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GothKitty~ This is a hauntingly beautiful piece. Tenderly poignant. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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pixiechild Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35 |
this is such a beatiful piece...so deep. very good keep it up. pixiechild |
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