Open Poetry #12 |
Phoenix From The Flames [MMMMarsha's Challenge, one day early] |
Sunshine
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Phoenix From The Flames Immortal mortal existence seek thee in constellation’s light lone beauty, beauteous right blood red in fire’s might heart of Arabian mind and lore renew anew of hope and dream longingly lives, dies, lives to fly dusting off ashes in drawn out sigh rise, Phoenix, rise and with you take these dreams 01.18.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-18-2001).] [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-02-2005 02:07 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautifully done Sunshine! -SEA |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooo i like this sunshine very good yuh |
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Sunshine
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SEA....Marsha is such a taskmaster....tch tch tch...but I'm so glad you enjoyed... Heyya Walt....good to see you....thanks! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it very much..... Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, you really showed with this write, not a stretch at all for you, but I'm glad we got to see it. It's beautiful! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine--I think this challenge you met superbly. Poeminister |
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Sunshine
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Charisma, thank you... Kethry...no, dear, you stretched much farther...well done on your behalf!... Poeminister, I am so glad you liked this, thank you... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just had to be the one didn't you. . . make the rest of us look bad. . . LOL great poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, HA! okay so you met and matched it, as I said I should have thought of something a lot lot harder. It is truly utterly wonderful. But if you think that's going to stop me from running around in here causing a stir you have another think coming dear heart. It really is wonderful, now no muttering, or plotting revenge you. After all I'm Nemesis, the daughter of Night. So naturally I come after Sunshine. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Sven...not hardly...she just caught me on a busy day!... Marsha you little imp...have a wonderful, puckish day, celebrating your birthday and all... |
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