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Living in a Snow Globe
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Living in a Snow Globe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Do you feel like you live in a snow globe? < !signature-->untouched by the warmth of the sun snowflakes falling around you and you are the only one You watch while others have their fun falling in love with their special man Do you feel like you live in a snow globe? untouched by human hands Did you ever feel like minced pork? served in between won ton after the love you cherished so long craved icing on a cinnamon bun Did you ever try being a friend? with someone who was once a lover someone you once called "darling" now his first name is hard to discover Do you feel like you live in a snow globe? waiting to no longer love apart dying inside a slow death a death of a melting heart A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Did you ever feel like minced pork? served in between won ton after the love you cherished so long craved icing on a cinnamon bun Did you ever try being a friend? with someone who was once a lover someone you once called "darling" now his first name is hard to discover' Excellent write, Victoria! You just don't know how this hits home! Great work! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is beautiful Victoria Love to read your poems |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ this is heavy with emotion.......I enjoyed the read even though it felt so sad, hugs -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Super piece! Snowpants also identified my two favorite stanzas. Great analogies all the way through. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Great write Victoria... Thank you for the read... *~coco~* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
insect..thank you..and i am happy you stopped by..that inspires me to keep writing sea..im glad you enjoyed Sea..thank you for reading.. VAS..thank you very much..nice to hear from you VAS Coco..you are welcome coco..thank you for peeking.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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