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Allured by fire
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Allured by fire |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Allured by fire allured by fire the double edged sword creating a mesmerizing spell pulling me into its beauty sparks powerful mysteries fascinating luminous energy enticing me ever closer longing to be near kindling embers thought long dead spontaneously igniting erotic dances in the flames uncontrollable heat transforming all you caress I reach out to touch you rapidly consuming me I step back shield myself remembering the suffering protected from future torment within your blaze divine or devastating |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the fire always looks nice. . . until. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Fires of the heart are the ones that burn most bright. You have written a wonderful piece here. Well done. Rich |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sometimes it's worth it.......to get burned.....even a little bit.......and sometimes not......this is great!!  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is the way I feel about poetry!!! Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this is the way I feel about everything.... This is a very wonderfully imaged poem, h. The quill gets sharper with every post! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you all.........its ok to play with fire.............sometimes. LOL Helen |
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