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Believing What Breathes
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Believing What Breathes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Believing What Breathes she believes in others more for them to see that belief lift their spirits and she breathes… she believes in the child and helps to wipe away the “can’t, don’t, no” of their existence and she breathes… she believes in the forces of nature, the good and bad of the wind and sun, rain, tornadoes, hurricanes sweeping through her days… and she breathes… she believes in things she can’t see and things that she can and she breathes… she believes in the aged and that they have mostly lead good lives and still have a lesson to teach, so she listens, and she breathes… she believes in what she hears and doesn’t hear, reads between the lines, separating chaff from wheat and she breathes… she believes in the you of you true of you, she holds tight to your dreams when you lose them, so they may be returned, unharmed, still safe… and she breathes… she believes in a smile that in passing it around others will smile, and it will pass on, and in that gesture, the flutter of a butterfly’s wing will create a breeze felt miles away… and she breathes… she believes in the young and the middle aged those who wage truth who fight the good fight lose graciously strive to attend the next battle and live to live another day and she breathes… she believes in a true love one that is given for sake of giving that will be accepted for the sake of the gift one that will either be here… or there… and she breathes… she believes in one man who believes in her ~ because ~ and she breathes… she believes in breathing and in breathing believes to breathe one more day… and she breathes… 01.17.01 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a gift to believe like this...beautiful my friend |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is beautiful!!! "she believes in one man who believes in her ~ because ~ and she breathes…" Oh yes, I love this.......  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari Kari Kari oh love, this is truly beauty and on the understanding that less is more Stunning Take care love Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Inhaling deeply and when she Exhales, the words flow through her and into her pen onto the page. . . and we are blessed. . . blessed the she breathes. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Continue breathing and bring on more like this one. I truely enjoyed the cadence of this one and it is almost like singing a song of inspiration. Wonderful write. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The spirit in your breath - I wish you could breathe on me - I believe - sometimes I wonder if my belief is half as strong as need be |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
...... W O W! .......... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm out of breath but I enjoyed this very much Kathleen |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
...and with each breath she takes, the world is a better place ~ Ruth <a href="http://www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html"> Original Minds </a> |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she believes in others more for them to see that belief lift their spirits and she breathes… ======================== she believes in the aged and that they have mostly lead good lives and still have a lesson to teach, so she listens, and she breathes… she believes in what she hears and doesn’t hear, reads between the lines, separating chaff from wheat and she breathes… she believes in the you of you true of you, she holds tight to your dreams when you lose them, so they may be returned, unharmed, still safe… and she breathes… ================ and she is an exceptional poet and I breathe her words in. way cool...once again When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This is an awesome poem!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You people are awesome...no wonder I breathe well when I am here... Paula...wrapping same and giving back to you...thank you... SEA...you're just easy to love...my friend...thank you... Marsha...your brevity is showing...a good thing...thank you... Sven, I think I am the one to be thankful here...thank you... Mark...breathing...deeply...thank you... Mr. Yeats...stronger than you know...thank you... doreen...your wows are so charming...thanks... Irish...breathe deep...thanks... hoot...glad you graced me with your presence, thank you my friend.... JM...the air is rare...and feels so good...thank you... Martie...I think you are the awesome one around here...thank you... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Karilea~ And the breath of you is beautiful...I absolutely adore this poem, one of your best Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very lovely, tender piece. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melybee...so wonderful for you to buzz in and visit...thank you little one... Virginia...thank you very much! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ And in her breathing are manifest the poems of her heart. Just lovely, sweet spirit of poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge...now I might breathe a bit easier this night...knowing the touch of White Feather... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Hehe, hey now, I like being called Melybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL Melissa....thanks for coming back.... |
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