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Born Mystery |
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Sunshine
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Born Mystery the wind whispered a haunting name and he wrestled privately with his need versus his desire ~ no game seek the fair, seek the fair the sun shone longingly on her face with all things going for her ~ she tried but she wondered why she cried he is there, he is there both at the end of their odds oddly enough they were convinced this was all there would be God does not play games you see to not ever look (but find) to not ever seek (but see) both unwinding in versatility there is a way, there is a way she wasn’t looking he wasn’t looking both were choking hear the wind, see the sun when then the tornado came she heard him on the wind he saw her in the sun each of you shall find the one and a mystery was born 01.17.01 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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the wind whispered a haunting name and he wrestled privately with his need versus his desire ~ no game seek the fair, seek the fair the sun shone longingly on her face with all things going for her ~ she tried but she wondered why she cried he is there, he is there ==================== she wasn’t looking he wasn’t looking both were choking hear the wind, see the sun when then the tornado came she heard him on the wind he saw her in the sun each of you shall find the one ===================== VERY VERY COOL WRITE love the format of this... and the style but most of all the longing and the emotions expressed mystic and way cool Sun ... and in me library  When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Sunshine
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JM...what can I say....you always nail 'em... thank you! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is outstanding, constantly you soar higher and higher. I kneel in admiration at the feet of the queen of poetic delight. Do I love this one, yes it is, absolutely fabulous. Into the library of course, but also on the wall at work. Utterly wonderful. Take care love Majestic Marsha Exit Marsha looking for blu tack stage right. You can have a choice you can go in the main hall, where you'll be seen and probably swiped at the first opportunity, or in the canteen. Oh whatever I'll copy you and post you twice. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha dear, just be careful where you place that tack [ouch!]...um, thanks!...LOL... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I think this is one of my favorites from you! Spectacular!!!! ( Whoosh!)  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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SEA, thank you for the spec...{~,^} |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Perfect - in every way - 'nuff said |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Mr. Yeats...I can only say...thank you...[but a wow escapes, too...] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . this is amazing. . . wonderful my friend. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You are a wonderful poet...I wish I could write like you....hmmm..maybe when I grow up. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"to not ever look (but find) to not ever seek (but see) both unwinding in versatility there is a way, there is a way" Sunshine, I love this. There is so much sometimes in letting things happen more serendiptiously--more naturally-- then efforting things into happening always. Excellently penned. Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven...on another plane...may be...thank you... Martie...what can I say?...lol...{~,^}... Poeminister...I haven't seen "serendipitous" in a long time...for some reason, it comes quite naturally from you....thank you....very much.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunshine this is exceptionally beatiful, even for you! And its not easy to outdo yourself! This is so mystical, yet hopeful, filled with fantasy and potential. Love it.. Sandra |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
love the way you did this and the form of it, very cool..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat....I'm just trying to keep up with the other poets....but if you think I've outdone myself...I'll put my pen down now [not!]LOL...thank you! Lana, kind words...thank you!... |
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