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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-01-17 04:52 AM

To Admire and Desire

Such a surprise
that warm glow
within your eyes
illuminating the way
like bright stars
in the sky.

Letting me know
where my heart
longs to go.
Making my heart aware
of feelings to share
with a heart that cares.

And you know
I want my own star
to hold close to admire
to kiss in desire.

Keep shining for me
and run not away.
Share with me
your desire to stay.

Michelle I can feel
you caring for me
and I am amazed.

Jameslee@January16,2001
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-01-17 04:56 AM

Smooth, romantic, soothing and lovingly warm....well written James!!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-01-17 05:08 AM

wonderful penned ...love the warmth in your words.

(Hugs))
Charisma

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-01-17 06:22 AM

Keep that star shining!!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-01-17 09:22 AM

And you know
I want my own star
to hold close to admire
to kiss in desire.
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dont we all SWJ ...
very cool poem of longing and desire
love the ryhme flow of this
well done sweet poet
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-17 10:07 AM

And i hope she is amazed that you are amazed ha...wonderful poem james..loved it

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-01-17 01:57 PM

Thank you ethome, Charisma, Irish, Janet and V for you sincere thoughtful words....take care..James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-01-17 06:58 PM

James~ this is wonderful and so hopeful, I really enjoyed this

-SEA

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-01-17 07:14 PM

ah yes, to do both is to know love. . .

excellent James. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-01-17 07:14 PM

James,
Fine words here. Well done.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-01-17 08:07 PM

~What a tender dedication~

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

11 posted 2001-01-20 01:22 PM

James...this is lovely dear friend and straight from your heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-01-31 05:08 AM

Thank you Sea, Sven, Daniel, Melissa and Paula...I'm still amazed and I am very pleased...James

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