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In This Dark Hour
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In This Dark Hour |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
in this dark hour hidden behind the smile pain reveals the shadow broken hearts tenderness and so much anguish life will go on as it should but there will always be a darkness hiding the light of what used to be blinding the heart and crippling the mind |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Did you write this just for me? You have seen into my heart tonight |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
blinding the heart and crippling the mind until the miracle when a pure heart selfless and giving shall with a gentle look turn the dark to light and give strength to useless legs Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Poet~ may your light shine bright then.....  -SEA |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Someone will bring real light into your life someday, Sharon. Until then, hold onto the promise of this light. Beautiful words, my friend. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
But in that, the knowing, is light made brighter. Excellent write. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
your words of wisdom shine bright Poet Devine...wonderful write! Nathan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so sad Sharon but beautifully said... life will go on as it should but there will always be a darkness hiding the light of what used to be so true are these lines great writing my dear Maree |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
PDV, such an emotive and powerful write write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such a sorrowful poem, yet beautifully penned, your words speak of my weeping heart tonight. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind comments. I truly appreciate them. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just happen to have a whole lot of candles... NO PROBLEM. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The pain never ever really goes away, there's always that shadow there....well written! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, there will always be shadows - may they only outline the brilliance in our words. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
shadows yes - yet they cast images on the wall of what once was - and never will be forgotton -Excellent Sharon - I truly loved this - probably because of the memories it recaptured |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such clarity and wisdom in these words Sharon ... beautifully written, went straight to this heart! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The light and the darkness - both born within... May we allow the light to shine brighter... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wise words are spoken here, and they are so true. thanks for sharing. Charisma |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Most of us hold sorrow very deep within, but that selfsame sorrow can spawn joy. THat is what I always endeavor to find. And in the midst of sorrow, I can usually find some things to laugh about. It masks the pain, but it helps the spirit Excellent poem Love Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It seems to me that those who brighten the most lives have experienced this anguish you write of so well... Excellent poem! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
good one miss versatility yuh |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and sometimes, that darkness never lets that light out again. . . and we are all the less for not seeing it. . . excellent words from you deVine. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
So Sad.....So true. Frankie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think we all have a darkest hour that stands out in our mind...James |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
i liked your poem and style a lot so i thought i'd do one for you ______________________ the hour has passed sadness is lost excitement returns to a heart of shadows and thumping pain living for truth watching as the sun's decent slowly creeps down but the heart and mind will be ready this time but still open to strange shadows forever |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wow!!!you want to be a writer, don't know how or when, find a quiet place, use a humble pen-paul simon |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poet deVine, How so very well written. Perfect should I add. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Smile, my friend, isn't it said that the darkest hours are just before dawn? I wish your true happiness to come to you soon. Peace Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...you write with such perfection of pen and emotion. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing, Sharon. Very well done! Denise |
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