Open Poetry #12 |
Melt |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Melt By: Noah Eaton 1/16/01 Melt with me, my love Let our hearts melt into one Let us never feel lonely or shy again When we are together as one, in total comfort instead Melt into my eyes I want to see you, I want to love you all my life Hold me, take me, let me be by your side May we forever be together, for all time Melt into my dreams Let us sleep at night peacefully Happy knowing our searches are complete As we are in each others arms, dreaming of each other, happily Melt into my body Embrace me with your soft warm body, attached to me Let me feel the softness of your lips, the silkiness of your skin Melt with me in the heat of our love, a love that will never dim Melt into my heart Feeling comfortable that we’ll never again be apart I love you, you are my dream… Melt with me |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"- Modern English Romantic poem, made me think of the song above.........love it! -SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Melt into my eyes I want to see you, I want to love you all my life Hold me, take me, let me be by your side May we forever be together, for all time' Beautiful write, Noah! I love it! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Thank you both for your wonderful comments, they fill me with such confidence and hope! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
sounds hot, Mistletoe...wonderful write! Nathan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah...you've always had it! I hope you keep it forever |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A most delightful read PoetFriendNoah... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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