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Seekest Me in Thy Soul
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Seekest Me in Thy Soul |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Seekest Me in Thy Soul Dark light of shadows, render not thy shade this day not in day, not by cloud nor shade of tree nor shade of thee but rather, Sire, seek me, seek me in thy soul… O sweet dark, sweeter thee than shall admit, do submit in this day, move the cloud, see the sun, see in thee sweet, sweet light, to vary shadows, but cast in bright for in Cimmerian dusk, even thy voice is faintly gone but by light of Ra and ray, the chorus is clear and strong so would thee not want to seek thy song in this light…. for in thy soul I would reside, in thy breath of word for to seek light by darkest of thy night, a candle bright is heard by word of joy “See! The light!” should thee seek me in thy soul… that this shimmer of life, true light, sunder shadows in the night 01.16.01 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
..in this day, move the clouds, see the sun.. Yes, we are lucky here to have our own special rays of Sunshine to drive away the clouds!! This shall now enter my library!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thus even as our love depart, This candle brigtest burn, Through darkest midst, And hour black, My back shalst never turn . Thankyou very much a truely inspirational poem, from a truely inspirational poet, glad you wrote it, I enjoyed reading it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I love this style of writing.....wish I could do it!  beautiful -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, (My Kari not the other Kari!) What can I say. Beautiful utterly utterly beautiful  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Our lady Sunshine unto us does impart rays so bright-divine light that reflects together aglow inspiro-her Sol of Passion darkness melts away in her aura yellow, golden, zenithal she beteems vivid colour uplifting us with her camena nuances of heart enlightened shining 'pon the pages of caeli her words are eloquentia illuminating th' horizon nurturing things into music enveloping us in love Sunshine, You write with sweetest Light. Beautifully penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed in thy soul shalt one find words of love and life for in thy soul are words so kind words of life and love Lady Sunshine, thou hast indeed penned an excellent poem, remining us again where love is to truly be found. . . Most wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Such grace and beauty is in this poem you write... Thank you SUNSHINE... *~coco~* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1, how much fun to visit your library, thank you!... Tom, thank you for your kind words... but SEA, you can....I know you can....I believe...[clapping hands...]... Marsha, a double double curtsey to you sweet one....thank you.... Poeminister, I am stunned...this... this is graciously beautiful, and I stand before you humbled, in awe, and amazed....and I doubt that I shall ever be able to give you the thanks you so deserve....so please know you have put a smile on my lips...and a glow in my heart...this is truly kind of you....thank you for your time and most lovely gesture.... Sven...we can pull the covers over our head...but still the light peeks in through our eyelashes....thank you!.... Ah Coco...thank YOU.... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
One word " "....Never mind, I'm speechless. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PK...you are too kind...I know that feeling very well...thank you... |
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