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“Out of Control”
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“Out of Control” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 I’m out of control, and can’t hold back, the beating of this heart… The trembling when you kiss these lips, could tear my world apart… The sparks that fly, when eye meets eye, could start a raging fire… But nothing can compare to mounting waves of sweet desire… Your fingers touch my skin, and leave electric trails behind… You look into my eyes and I’m afraid of what you’ll find… You’ll see the need that’s waiting there, for you inside my heart… I’m ready for your taking… Please don’t break my world apart… But hold me ‘til the beating of my heart has found a pace… And kiss me ‘til my trembling lips are steady on my face… And keep me safe upon the waves of love’s desiring sea… I’ve given you my self-control… You’ve set my spirit free… Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This is just lovely, lovely, lovely ! What a pleasure to read this beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
As Marge said, just lovely, my friend. jwesley |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marge ~~~ Ah.....so glad that you dropped by and enjoyed my love poem on this Sunday!!  ~~~ jwesley ~~~ If I could put a smile on your face, then I feel happy, my friend!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Sunny1... This is simply wonderful.. I loved reading this and feeling all the emotions..Made me smile on a cold Sunday afternoon...Thanks for the lovely read...  ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Hi Sunny Absolutely real........................ Anybody who's ever known love should be moved.Sure worked for me. Soar on forever. bbent ~ live and let live ~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ LL ~~~ I am so glad that my words can warm up a chilly winter afternoon, and put a smile on your face!! Thank you!! ~~~ bbent ~~~ Thank you, and may we all soar on forever!! Sometimes it's ok to be out of control!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sunny, How AWESOME to have these feelings....... And you've expressed them quite well. Truly a lovely piece to read ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunny1--Lovely and passionate. Beautiful write... Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Irie ~~~ Oh, thank you, my friend.... It's easy to express such feelings when you have them in your heart!! ~~~ Poeminister ~~~ Thank you so much, and I'm glad that you enjoyed your read of this work!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sunny, this is truly wonderful! What a magnificent flow, and such beautiful sentiments ... an inspiring and enchanting read to start my day, thank you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny, absolutely fabulous! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Fly high my sister of the blue pages.......this was a lovely write and a beautiful way of expressing what is in your heart. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee lady i loved this poem. I love the feelings of passion. I became lost in your words. Wondeful writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Kit ~~~ Good morning.....and may you have a day full of love and passion!! Thank you!! ~~~ Kethry ~~~ and you write on, always!! Thank you!! ~~~ Mark ~~~ Glad you enjoyed, my brother of the not-so-blue pages!! ~~~ Richard ~~~ Oh....if a poem can cause a reader to become engrossed in it's touch, then it is worth it to the writer!! Thank you!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wonderful feelings within your words hon..enjoyed reading very much HUGS~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunny, your words are rocketing with passion...so much of what you share, delivers precious thoughts of my own love. Robert Joseph |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Sunny, this is perfect. Funny I just wrote a similar themed poem, but in free verse. Course I like yours better! We are thinking alike again.. S |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ V ~~~ Thank you for stopping by and reading, my friend....always nice to visit with you!! ~~~ R.J. ~~~ If you can take these feelings of love into your own life experience, than I feel my words had great meaning, and I thank you!! :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sandra ~~~ Yes.....we are twins in thought, a good percentage of the time.....that's why you are such a wonderful friend!! :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lovely poem full of joy! Thanks for sharing! Corinne |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful |
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