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Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-03-23 12:50 PM

Lover's Notes

Love songs often change.
Love comes quickly, then can die.
Hearts become aware
As the lover's play sad songs
In the key of 'goodbye notes'.

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-23 01:09 AM

Katherine,

"..sad songs.." But what would we do without them. Thanks for this pleasing reminder.

Bob

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-03-23 03:32 AM

Don't I know it...James

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-03-23 03:50 AM

Hearts become aware!.......that seems to be the hard part! Well written!

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-03-23 04:15 AM

Thanks Bob, those old love songs really did a number on me. You know, 'the cry in your beer ones'..

Kate

James you sound like you know all about sad songs..we all do at one time or other.

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

5 posted 2001-03-23 04:17 AM

Thank you Ethome.. I was singing some sad songs for sure when I wrote this. I remember so well..

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-03-23 11:14 AM

Ah, the birth of the blues, and how I love them with coffee in the morning just prior to the rise of sun. Without fodder, an american voice - those of the blues- would not be born.

"I am not now that which I have been."

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2001-03-23 04:07 PM

In the key of Goodbye notes..

Songs of sadness..
Good write.
Bernie

a

a day keeps the world

'G

Bernie Slicker

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

8 posted 2001-03-23 06:52 PM

Mabe-thanks for listening to me sing the blues, nobody does it better.

Kate

Shalom
Thank you Bernie,the sun'll come out tomorrow..in Florida we can almost bet on that, right? Thanks dear..

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2001-03-24 04:06 PM

Katherine - how true are your words, very powerful, very strong.

BC

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

10 posted 2001-03-24 04:27 PM

Kate So I'll sing Hello Dolly to ya

I know these old love songs send a knot to your throat. So lets do a re-write shall we? Wite a new song and sing it real loudly LOL smiles atcha my sweet friend!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

11 posted 2001-03-24 05:29 PM

Thank you BC, I love doing a tanka, few words, but with a powerful punchline!

Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

12 posted 2001-03-24 05:31 PM

Cherie, thank you for your compliment..there's a new song in my heart now, I'm gonna do that new song real soon lol.

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2001-03-25 12:45 PM

Goodbye is the saddes note of all; there is always an element of pain in any relationship, isn't there? Thank you for this short and meaningful post.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

14 posted 2001-03-25 02:53 AM

Oh do I relate! My heart and soul are SO sensitive to words of songs, that I run to turn them off! My mind forgets until a song reminds me, great job Kate, now start singing, "Happy Days Are Here Again", and I am sure there are lots of us will join in the chorus (p.s. move to Forum 13 I almost missed you).

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

15 posted 2001-03-25 10:10 AM

Irish Rose, yes there is always a hint of sadness in most relationships. Thank you for stopping bye..

Kate

************

Mysteria, I was just about to start the chorus of "With a song in my heart" when you came along..thanks for your positive words.

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

16 posted 2001-03-26 10:34 PM

Absolutely beautiful Kate....I loved it.
Regards, Sue.

Suetang

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

17 posted 2001-03-27 12:25 PM

Thank you Sue, it's nice to see you here.

Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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