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Come Little Firefly
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Come Little Firefly |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Come Little Firefly Virginia Salter come on little firefly light my heart come on little firefly give me a spark set me afire with your rhythmical blaze give me a glow that brightens the haze that hovers around me shrouding me in gloom bring me the glimmer that causes me to bloom tickle my fancy thrill me through and through shine effervescent beneath the harvest moon dance on the vapors that float on the breeze pirouette the night glow around and through the trees then come to rest on my palms raised to keep your lovely glow in my dreamland of the hours that I sleep © September 11, 2000 I've never had the joy of seen a firefly and I do so want to. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ this is wonderful!  -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh this is so well penned, both fireflies and butterflies are so beautiful. The flow, the rhyme, the melody within this poem was delightful This is precious! Please enter this in the next passions "Voices on The Web" book!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Truely a beautiful piece you have given us. Personally I love the little things and love it when the yard is filled to the hilt with these little wonders. When you see a work of God such as these then you know that there is always hope to be found. Think he knew that when he gave them to us?  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Fireflies are spectacular!! Just like living pieces of light to give humans something wonderful to watch and dream on......I think God knew we needed something to amuse us!! Great writing here, my friend!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
VAS--This is lovely. Nicely penned. Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Got to agree, truely buetiful, I like this one alot . This is one of those poems that I could read over and over again and never get board of it . Full of sweetness and imagery . Thanks my freind . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I love this! It's a keeper! Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vas, Enjoyed the read very much. Keep them coming. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Excellent poem! Enjoyable read  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
...bump... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all so very much! You have each made my eyes filled with moistures of joy! Your words touch my heart and make it feel loved, like I've been able to share the gift I've been given...a LOVE of writing! |
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