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Heaven sends for you |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
By cherubic graces we are fated Held together by common interests Winged angels measure, our hearts weighted, We somehow find ourselves a place to rest Love shall be willed upon us now, it’s true For all of Heaven smiles with sweetness pure And rapture wrapped in bliss for all you do Your fragile nature itself half the lure Cold comfort in today, not in sorrow, For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff Watching them take you where I cannot go Useless is my longing for only ‘if’ With this broken arrow I cling unto, Waiting helpless, as Heaven sends for you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You guys....are you all of one mind to make us Passionate Women weep? Ah well done....now, please, PLEASE write one of fun.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Going right to my heart this morning with this emotional poem of yours.............so beautifully done  SEA |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
Ohhh this was so beautiful...it touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
By cherubic graces we are fated Held together by common interests Winged angels measure, our hearts weighted, We somehow find ourselves a place to rest Love shall be willed upon us now, it’s true For all of Heaven smiles with sweetness pure And rapture wrapped in bliss for all you do Your fragile nature itself half the lure Cold comfort in today, not in sorrow, For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff Watching them take you where I cannot go Useless is my longing for only ‘if’ With this broken arrow I cling unto, Waiting helpless, as Heaven sends for you ====================== (nope...cant pick just a few lines of this jewel of your poetic crown) this is a sonnetized *sigh* *S* superb poetic use of metaphor here PK ... this is an ethereal and celestial beauty .. with such well conceived poetic phrases employed as well. "For all of Heaven smiles with sweetness pure And rapture wrapped in bliss for all you do Your fragile nature itself half the lure" "For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff Watching them take you where I cannot go Useless is my longing for only ‘if’ With this broken arrow I cling unto, Waiting helpless, as Heaven sends for you" like I said poet sir...*sighs on high*  oh you speak to me in riddles |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have taken my heart and twisted it. Tis going to happen to all of us, sooner or later. Hopefully later. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice expression...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The title of this drew me in with high expectations...I was not disappointed PK...you "Blue" me away Beautiful work oh glowing one!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Butterflies..."Blue"??? "Glowing one"?? *S* |
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